All Comments on 'A Well Earned Break'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
this story sucked

this story sucked

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good effort, bad language

A few too many spelling/grammar errors made me lose immersion.

- "Was it worth it?"

- "Yes, I am"

:S

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