All Comments on 'A Were Story Ch. 05'

he was "a few meters away" so he could hear the scream but didn't hear anything before when the two women fought?

Looking forward to the next one ... and good luck on exams.

Hope you can add another chapter sooooon!!!!

You try to fit too much into each chapter. I would have liked to have seen the rest of the dinner instead of you just telling us. I also would have liked to have seen the three girls together. I find it hard to believe they haven't attempted to sneak to each other's rooms to get some answers, seeing as they're so close.

I say focus more on the relationships (sisters, cousins, mates) first and then progress the storyline.

I don't really like the plot jumps..it's like we just keep getting scenes from different parts of the story but they don't really flow well. I would've liked to hear about the rest of the night too and it is a bit unbelievable that the cousins didn't even properly speak to her about everything the day before. I loved the first couple of chapters in the story because i thought it was good character development but I feel that is lacking a bit now.. I still am interested in reading this but I hope we get more filling in the blanks and individual couple time in the next few chapters..

Hope the exams go well but please get back to us as soon as you can Im LOVING this story.x

Please write more. I love this story!!!!

Been checking everyday for an update. Please come back

BUT PLEASE, PLEASE COME BACK AND FINISH THIS STORY!

So this is just another good story on its way to greatness. Please continue... reading good stories kind of help my writer's block. You inspire me.

I'm obsessed with this story! All your characters are so enjoyable and their chemistry is scorching! Even with such little physical interaction between them so far, I can already tell when they finally do consummate their matings, it will be absolutely delectable. I'm also really interested in the witch's storyline, being secretly mated to the monster of the story. Please please please write more! Or if you've written more on another site, please share the link. I really want to find out the rest of this tale!

The ear scratches have me happily awaiting the next chapter