All Comments on 'A Wet Dream'

You need to learn the difference between the verbs lie and lay. She was lying, not laying (lying=fibbing, laying=what you do TO something).

Did he "retrieve" that taste because he'd previously lost it?

Sultry describes behavior, affect, not a flavor or a taste

She lets "her delicate pink move" up around his nose? Did you mean her delicate pink pussy?

He gives "a gentle of love bites" to signal he's in control? And lays again: She "submissively lays face down on the bed next to him." Lays what? Or did you mean that she lies submissively next to him?

Bait = what you use to catch fish or animals while hunting. To bate (bates, bating, bated) is to lessen or to moderate the force of some action. A bated sword, for example, is one with a blunted or capped tip so as not to injure. Bated breath = breath held back, restrained.

Erect herself? She's got a dick?

quit nit-picking and enjoy the story---it's porn, pornographic fiction, nothing more, nothing less.