by june9theveryday
He reread the chapter and began working through some practice problems, referring to some science related forums online whenever something stumped in.
SHOULD BE:
He reread the chapter and began working through some practice problems, referring to some science related forums online whenever something stumped HIM.
She walked with pride, wore her colors unashamed, took what she want and knew that she was right.
SHOULD BE:
She walked with pride, wore her colors unashamed, took what she WANTED and knew that she was right.
Great job on a 2 page flash tale! The buildup was kind of quick but still good. The sex was so fuckin' hot, it's a wonder that the shower water didn't start boiling! Great first effort in the IR/L category! :)
5 HUGE Stars!