All Comments on 'A Wet Encounter'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Amazing story

I absolutely love this story!

KorotKorotabout 8 years ago
TYPO

He reread the chapter and began working through some practice problems, referring to some science related forums online whenever something stumped in.

SHOULD BE:

He reread the chapter and began working through some practice problems, referring to some science related forums online whenever something stumped HIM.

KorotKorotabout 8 years ago
TENSE ERROR

She walked with pride, wore her colors unashamed, took what she want and knew that she was right.

SHOULD BE:

She walked with pride, wore her colors unashamed, took what she WANTED and knew that she was right.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
A nice hot story

Excellent story...

IronDragonIronDragonabout 8 years ago
That was hot as Hell!

Great job on a 2 page flash tale! The buildup was kind of quick but still good. The sex was so fuckin' hot, it's a wonder that the shower water didn't start boiling! Great first effort in the IR/L category! :)

5 HUGE Stars!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
hot shit

great story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Heck Ya

What guy his age would have said no .. Nice Story

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