All Comments on 'A Wheelie Good Time'

Hahaha I have SO been in Adara's position before what with the checking out a hottie's butt while being tormented by my bicycle seat! And when you're horny it's hard to stop thinking about sex - although you might have gone just a liiiiittle overboard with quite how much it pops up into her head before we get to the action. But hey, following a hottie for that long can do that to you ;)

Sexy fun!

Reading this made me want to dust off my Ribble. Loved the story, hope we'll see more of these two? Pretty please?

First things first, I love your writing style - right from the beginning. It's professional and a slight sprinkle of humour thrown in between makes it an awesome read for me. I love it!

I love the tension, and that scene where she gets caught stuffing herself up (Actually, I laughed out loud enough to wake my roomie XD)

Any criticism from me would be its shortness. It's like a blink-and-it's-gone story. It read that fast. I don't know what else to comment upon as I haven't got enough of material given in the first place. I'd definitely love to read more of this.

A 5* read.

BTW, if you're worried about not-so-good ratings, don't worry. Short stories don't do well on most voter's list. If this story were at least 6 pages (at the same pace and eroticism), I'd wager a score of 4.70 and above for it.

Overall, a great read.

Bard.

My wife & I have recently got into cycling, and I have enjoyed many hours watching her delicious lycra-clad ass in front of me and having all sorts of naughty thoughts ..... so this story really worked for me. (Not ashamed to admit I had a hand down my pants well before the end .... )

The fact that it is short adds to the sense of urgency.

The first time won't be the last time I read this :o)

Wonderful story and great build up. Imagery is spot-on!

Their sexy perspiration wafted up to me....

Loved it! Felt like I was right there with them.