All Comments on 'A White Tiger and The Wolf Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

excellent chapter...Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. will Kay beat Lazio

livlivvylivlivvyabout 13 years ago
so good!

I won't lie, I'm not a fan of abuse in any way, shape, or form, but I thought you used it well in the context of your story and it truly did add to story line and where you're heading. I love your story and hope you'll be posting more, and soon!

NightpleasureNightpleasureabout 13 years ago

I did enjoy this chapter, I am ready for Sally to be rescued. NO one should suffer that kind of abuse.Lazlo needs to be dealt with immediately but the story is really good. keep up the good work.

firecracker424firecracker424about 13 years ago
loved it

i'm amazed at how far you have come as a writer an look forward to further chapters. your story is wonderful. I cant wait to see where you take it next. keep up the excelent work!

tiger_babe_05tiger_babe_05about 13 years ago
Great!

I loved this chapter! One of the best ones yet! I cant wait to see where this goes!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

great series keep writing more

lovebird24lovebird24about 13 years ago

Excellent! I absolutely can't wait to read more.

katgoddess1katgoddess1about 13 years ago
Great

Your writing has improved immensely! Good work.

mikothebabymikothebabyabout 13 years ago
More please

and very very soon - do not make us wait so long as the last time - I look daily for your next chapter.

ladybug71ladybug71about 13 years ago
Great story....

Great story so far and I'm waiting to read the rest of it. As per comments from the others, please don't let a lot of time lapse between chapters. I just can't wait to find out what happens next with Kay, Bradley and the others, trying to overpower Lazlo. Like Lazlo's victums, maybe he needs to be sexually tortured (and then killed). That was just a though. Keep up the great work!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Keep writing

THIS IS AMAZING PLSZ WRITE SOMEMORE I CAN'T WAIT PLZZZZZZ U R AMAZING

bearmad1963bearmad1963almost 13 years agoAuthor
Chapter 11

Hi everyone, I have just sent chapter 11 to my editor as I finished writing it today. I'm sorry it has taken me a long time to finish this chapter but I have been unwell and in hospital for two weeks. I'm a lot better now thank goodness. So depending on when my editor sends back the chapter and what alterations will need to be done. Chapter 11 should be on line very soon. Thanks for your continued support. From Kay

bigman9963bigman9963almost 13 years ago
I think i speak for everyone when i say...

that i'm glad that you are feeling better.

bearmad1963bearmad1963almost 13 years agoAuthor
Chapter 11

I posted Chapter 11 today. So hopefully it should be online in the next few days. Thanks to all those of you that have sent me private messages.

shadowssoul09shadowssoul09almost 12 years ago
Word usage

I can see how your writing evolvws from reading from chapter 1 to now and sometimes the incorrect word usage is funny if not hillarious but it does distract from the story some. Keep writing though as it is an excilent story

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
i like..

i read the first ten......looking forward to the rest

bearmad1963bearmad1963over 8 years agoAuthor
My book will no longer be posted here SORRY

I have been told by a few of my readers that my work is been copied and used in other stories.

I have now transferred all of my story to wattpad. I'm sick of people copying my story and using it.

My watt pad name is bearmad50 this is the link for you.

https://www.wattpad.com/user/bearmad50

I have posted chapters 1 - 14 on that sight. Please come and check it out. I will no longer be posing this story here. Bye thanks for all your support over the years. From Kay.

bearmad1963bearmad1963over 8 years agoAuthor
New wattpad name is

My new wattpad name is bearmad50kayclarke. Come and join me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Help

Im not sure if I missed something or not, but at the beginning she had no idea who her parents were. Now in this chapter she seemed to know a lot about her mothers pride and that stuff they put on the boys privates.....just wondering if she didnt know her mother how does she know of her mothers hate of bullies?

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ATTENTION. I have been told by a few of my readers that my work is been copied and used in other stories. I have opened an account on wattpad and I'm thinking of transferring my story to there. I have now transferred all of my story to wattpad. I'm sick of people copyin...