All Comments on 'A Whole New World'

I liked the idea of the story but it was too quick and finished too soon

I look forward to reading more of your work ;)

But also sweet and sexy. I love true stories, and this was a good one!

Thank you for your comments. I truly appreciate the feedback and will use them to improve my writing skills. Please enjoy my next true story about my friend Maddie.

is this a true story. if so then that is so hot

She sounds like she needs to take control and handle the situation by 7am, b/c morning 3ways "breakfast" fun is the best. Especially on a king size bed that is in room 234. Kelly is a girl that knos EXACTLY what she's doing, hence the excitement and the control is all taken care or, weather it is showering wetness and oral and organums, and it looks like it it takes her 5 mins to get right down to business NOT QUESTIONS ASKED; just action and satisfaction, which makes her friend excited and makes her jump right in and continue the sexcapade all the way to full sex and pleasure; also KNOWS how to have fun all the way til the vary last wet white drop . In Jesus name I pray Amen

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