All Comments on 'A Whore is Born Ch. 05'

by LordRamsay

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Dumb

The story is moronic, just like the author. Make the world a better place, quit writing, better yet, commit suicide.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
What the hell!

Why do you hate woman so much?

goamz86goamz86about 16 years ago
Too Long!!!!

Normally I love your stories, but the last too in this series have been way to wordy. Get to the point. you could have done this chapter in like 2 or three pages instead of 5.

Keep up the good work though, i like most of your stories

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Love thos story...

Why are some people post so negative comments ? Why are they reading stories they don't like from the early beginning ? I wonder !

Please keep the story going !

Thank you !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
ignore the dickheads

loved the story can't wait for the next if others don't like it then don't read it. I can see her husband is the type to let it happen to her for his career. waiting for part 6 don,t keep us waiting too long please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
why read this?

I'm constantly amazed at the comments that appear on lord ramsey's work. If you don't like it, why would it take you 5 pages to figure it out? As far as I'm concerned, he is one of the best authors on the site, and is the only author, since jigs has retired, to write in this genre.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
a great piece of work...

A Whore Is Born is an absolutely exquisite series. Your character development, situational scenes, and the movement of the story line are all first rate. I think part 5 is one of the best I've ever read. The ambassador's method of control is excellent and his use of his bodyguards' to force compliance from his victim is very well done.

Additionally, the emergence of the mother/daughter scenario is a great teaser and I look forward to your development of the daughter and how both finally learn the status of the other. My congratulations on work very well done...

FastEddie26FastEddie26almost 16 years ago
Love this series

Dont leave us hanging! The character development is great.

goddess9991goddess9991almost 16 years ago
Beautiful

This was fantastic. Please don't listen to the hate mail you recieve. These stories aren't about hating women, but giving them what they need. Just because it isn't what you, personally, need, does not make it wrong. And I doubt it has ANYTHING to do with being black. Oh well. I loved it. Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Fabulous

Cant wait for the next chapert.

Ive enjoyed all your stories,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
...heavy traffic!!!...

...XXXellent!!!...the BEST read YET!!!...please continue the excellent penmanship...as an author, you have no equal...and simply ignore the cockroaches who somehow find a way to read more..simple hypocrisy!!...the format and content are exceptional...but provide even more of what the recipient whores are feeling and saying and groaning...more expression on their part to create highest impact..keep up the good work..we'll be looking for it...and, YOU GO GIRLS!!!XXXXXXXXXXXXXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO...;)))

TPP5TPP5almost 15 years ago
Wow thanks

Oh to be Debbie, I almost came just reading. Please give us more from that depraved mind and let me know I am not the only slut with such desires.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Absolutely Fantastic

Absolutely fantastic!! A totally enthrawling story,from the beginning. Truly hope that you don't leave us hanging too long before the next episodes are published.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
quite impressive

In my opinion the best writer on this site is Shoguy. Her writing style of young 18-19 year old females that turn onto wealthy-powerful and extremely endowed men is spectacular.Your characters are similar in that the men are 60 plus and well hung and always get what they want, but the difference is that your men use force to seduce their females, while the older men in Shoguy's stories are a magnet for young females, due to a vast reputation for having massive endowments and being powerful and ruthless. The "sir" and smacking gets played-out, but the female dress code is very sexy. You should read Shoguy's stories such as, "Naughty Teen & Fiances Grandfather", and Power & Wealth". I am positive that those stories could inspire your writing.

RedtoffeeRedtoffeeabout 14 years ago
A rollicking tale

I must agree with previous comments - that was a magnificent story of depravity. Let's hope it continues to unparalleled depths ...

breezer1breezer1almost 14 years ago
Again.......

why have u not finished this????

m8 fuk those other idiots i give up on stories that r shite normally on the 2nd page

have left a comment on naive series but really wish u would finish these

billie babkabillie babkaover 13 years ago
Please continue....loving it

Only wish i was debbie. And i hope the two bodyguards are even rougher with her than the Ambassador. Whores like she and i need it.

leggylassleggylassover 13 years ago
Many Compliments

The flow of the story and chaprters leave room for the imagination while making for a tidy package. It is easy to be compassionate for the female characters and envious as well. I do look forward to the continuation and the hopefully epic conclusion at the country home as intimated in a previous chapter. As a bifem i hope there is more interplay amongst the women...maybe even a Domme added to the mix.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
GREAT STORY

Have just located you as a writer on this web and enjoy your stories and

the looking forward to read some new chapters as stated by you. Hope to see additional ones in this new year. Keep going - thanks

badromance101badromance101over 13 years ago
AHH

About to cum and the story finished...please finish them!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Please finish it

Good story but still not finished and waiting for some new chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Please continue story

Great one and like the development, but not been continued for several years although promised. Pls continue it!

kemanderkemanderalmost 11 years ago
Hey Rambo

Whatever happened to Katie Jones? Why don't you finish what you started?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Love the essence of the story but your outline leaves too many unanswered questions

I"n order to clean things up with all your characters, you really need to do that ASAP so you can either move forward or end this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great Story

Please continue this is a great story. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Love it!!

I'm soaking wet!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

The best story I have ever read. Absolutely fantastic. Need it to be continued as soon as possible!! Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Jackie in horsham

I always cum so hard reading this story sir

Love jackie xxx

HotForLitHotForLitover 5 years ago
Please Sir, May we have some more?

I see I am not the only one waiting to read more of the genioushood

chloelovesfurchloelovesfurover 3 years ago
chloe tv

God that was horny !

chloelovesfurchloelovesfurover 3 years ago
chloe tv

LR I need more of this story.......Please x

naughty Papanaughty Papaabout 3 years ago

Wow all your stories are great but this takes the cake...are you thinking of writing again this

OzeminotaurOzeminotaurover 2 years ago

Please come back and add to your story’s they are great

I think the husband should get his promotion but should also get cock locked and be forced to watch his wife get fucked now and then and I’d love to see the General fuck is daughter

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Please quit saying black men have13 inch dicks hate to tell you but it was a white man that had the biggest dick not blackman

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

So sick of the bbc trope. Check out some penis size calculators online. The chance of a guy having a 13 inch penis is literally like 1 in a billion regardless of race. Worl record is a guy from one of the Stans countries at like 13.5 inched and ge is Caucasian. Seriously no woman's vagiba could take over 10 inches and even that is rare. Just dumb. Wife loses her mind to rapists with big cocks. Whatever.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Hope got gang raped knocked up good cunt asshole mouth fucked sametime they used her like piece of meat fucked whole night until she couldn't walk ripped her cunt and asshole

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