All Comments on 'A Wider Sky Ch. 03'

TB, i like how you are sparingly feeding us the clues. Your writing style leads this reader into amaze of assumptions and hypothesis. I really enjoy having to figure out the mysteries.

Sorry, but I could not make it past the first few paragraphs, due to all of the typos, misspellings and grammar issues. For example, It is not "hoover craft", it is "hovercraft" (all one word, and "hover" rather than "hoover"). A competent editor could help you with that type of thing, making your work much more readable for those who notice these types of things, who get distracted and pulled out of the story every time they see one.

I am living and it, and please keep up the good work in spite of any mispelings :) :) :) Yes that was misspelled on purpose for the critics to have something to "enjoy."

The MC's a girl??

I can't stop reading this story! I am so curious about so many things. What will the aliens be like, how is she going to like school, why are the humans living in the realm so odd? You have definitely grabbed my attention. On to the next chapter!