by Sporting Spectator
This is a well written story, nicely paced, and with good descriptive writing. Perhaps the sex scenes could have been a bit longer and the charaecter's descripions a little clearer though there's a lot to be said for letting the reader create his or her own description.
As for the story line itself, well maybe it's just me, but I simply don't see what the delight is in having your partner, male or female, have sex with other guys or women. Oh well, that's just an old question of mine.
Very hot story - my wife and I fantasize about it often - when she gets a few drinks into her, she gets very hot and horny - although she has flashed her pussy and titties at guys, she's never let anyone but me into her pussy - we have acted it out in bed (with dildos) and it makes her very hot - I would love to see her fuck another guy (or two ;-) but the opportunity has just never "cum" up.
Fair story but I find that this theme of getting off on watching your wife being booped and getting excited by it is a little boring.
Just a question if its so tiresome - why read it?
But what made it tiresome was tha it could have ben much better if he would have written and explained more.
Not a bad effort just pretty much standard fare. Take longer next time.
My wife and I once attended a party where there were much younger folks and plenty of alcohol. After one young fellow played with her ass quite a bit word got around. She was felt up a lot and did a lot of kissing. She wanted to take one young fellow home for a threesome which we did. He was unsure about what to do when an older couple invited him into their bed, but after the initial shock and some encouragement from my hot wife, he performed quite well. It was a night he'll never forget.
These stories are either exciting for you, or not. If not then why read them! I liked this.
poor sick low character of a husband for letting them abuse your wife when nearly passed out.
These stories either excite - or they don't. I am continually surprised by those with a supposed 'moral streak' who attack authors who post stories such as this. I have written some myself, and been on the end of such critcism. If you don't like it - why are you reading ?
This is a well written and exciting story paced nicely and without the usual exageration that often accompanies this theme. Some people may live it out for real - but for most of us it remains a fantasy, not a prescription for how to lead a life. The author himself states this is fantasy. Critics please note!
These stories either excite - or they don't. I am continually surprised by those with a supposed 'moral streak' who attack authors who post stories such as this. I have written some myself, and been on the end of such critcism. If you don't like it - why are you reading ?
This is a well written and exciting story paced nicely and without the usual exageration that often accompanies this theme. Some people may live it out for real - but for most of us it remains a fantasy, not a prescription for how to lead a life. The author himself states this is fantasy. Critics please note!
Excellent story. Well told and got me very hard. Thank you. More please!
I am looking forward to taking my wife to a party like that! ssundiegofun
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watching your car being destroyed in a demolition derby, I would guess. None for me, thanks.
is he the same guy from the other story? If he is, no doubt he is a looser with no self esteem...
My question: Did he loved his wife? I don't think so...He didn't love or respected her...For him she was just a whore for him to use...1*
He loves his wife & the wife loves him back. They are DIFFERENT (probably not by choice).
I have had a voyeur side since the onset of puberty.
My first wife was cheating on me & i was cheating on her. Our marriage ended. In hindsight, i believe we should have tried open marriage before we decided to part ways.
My best friend has the hots for my wife. I do not know how i would feel if by the swimming pool she asked him to apply sun screen lotion on her back or to massage her thighs. What if they French kissed in front of me. Would i watch & enjoy? Would i stop being friends with him? I know i wouldn't be able to leave her because i love her too much.
Wife needs to leave hubby. What is he a pimp and a cuck? What a terrible partner. He isn’t a man and she needs to cut his nuts off.
Husband is stupid..wife sharing is ok.. but loaning her out and allowing her to be gang banged without stopping it shows no love at all for her...
Excerpt from the story:
"... He held his cock, slipped between her thighs, and rubbed it up and down her wet slit and then and I saw his large cock disappear into her open pussy. He moved rapidly, his hips rising up and down as he took his pleasure between my wife's legs..."
I'm copy pasting somebody else's comment.
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MY ANSWER to impo_61 (11/11/15): TO EACH HIS OWN.
He loves his wife & the wife loves him back. They are DIFFERENT (probably not by choice).
I have had a voyeur side since the onset of puberty.
My first wife was cheating on me & i was cheating on her. Our marriage ended. In hindsight, i believe we should have tried open marriage before we decided to part ways.
My best friend has the hots for my wife. I do not know how i would feel if by the swimming pool she asked him to apply sun screen lotion on her back or to massage her thighs. What if they French kissed in front of me. Would i watch & enjoy? Would i stop being friends with him? I know i wouldn't be able to leave her because i love her too much.
End quote.
What a slut and stupid husband. Unless the husband was planning on having proof for divorce.
I had 5 guys once and my man loved it and is still here. We made it a monthly thing