by Noel
This was a very good story, and I am anxious to read more from this author. I was very impressed, keep up the good work.
great job. i really loved your use of totems and werewolves. a little twist. keep writing. i wouldn't mind reading a Part2.
He needed to lick her pussy some more but other than that it IS HOT.
You are very good and very descriptive. I enjoyed it immensely.
I loved the whole thing, but you went so fast! Slow it down a little next time, I want to enjoy the lush and vivid pictures you paint with words. =^_^= Keep writing, I'll keep reading. Merry Part
So, she's not married? That was just classic girl lie 101? Otherwise what will happen with her husband?O.O Good story though, hope you do the other girl's tales. I think the earth girl needs some loving after that rough night lolXD
Lovely and deeply satisfying story. Descriptions were beautiful. Tasteful use of paganism! = )
It went by too quickly! I'd love more.