All Comments on 'A Woman In Need Ch. 01'

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subgentsubgentover 14 years ago
Deserved

From what i read.. you, Allegra, deserved your orgasm :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
too short

This first chapter is well-written, but much too short in all respects. There is no proper background or plot build-up, and no proper introduction to the characters. The romantic atmosphere of this chapter, however, is marvelous.

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