All Comments on 'A Woman Is Big and Beautiful'

I really enjoyed your story a lot. Your descriptions of what the male character is thinking are really good, but I think it would be even better if you used it interspersed with dialogue instead of just telling us what they say. It would really add another nice whole layer to it if we could see what these characters would say to each other in their situations. Keep writing, I like!

Great story !! It's hard to believe nobody else has left a comment. Keep writing in this manner you have talent. I really enjoy your work.