All Comments on 'A Woman of Lust and Anger'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
this story is not good

if you think that this story gives any pleasure to anyone you are completely wrong you cant develope a story like you are writing what you tell to your reader your reader needs to read what you say to someone els

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Could've been longer.

Some criticism. You could've drawn it out, build it up, make it longer. This is short and sort of unsatisfying.

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