All Comments on 'A Woman's Decision Ch. 02'

The story I felt was hot and steamy as far as it went, but it could have very well went quite a bit farther into detail. The action could have been described with a more desciptive narrative once the parties got involved with each other, the action seemed to trail off just when it should have heated up. But otherwise a great story!

there was a small amount of confusion in your continuity - one minute she was seducing her husband after their dinner date and the next line shes packing her bags to go to paulas? Fantastic story, just lost me a bit there.