All Comments on 'A Woman's Fantasy'

i liked your story, the plot was very sexy. However, you have misspellings that while they don't detract from the story, they are a nuisance. The word dinner has two "n"'s not one, and the word "peek" in the context of this story is not spelt "peak". Also I would have fitted in a shower scene, as they get busy eating each other "out", they should have showered "in" and freshened up their busy cunts, after running around all day seeing clients etc, they would have both been a bit on the nose, so to speak

You started out nice and slow, developing the flirtation between the two women, then started the sex and finished it by the next sentence? This was worse than a wham bam, thank you ma'am. And fisting?? That is not an everyday occurrence in lesbian relationship. It's like a woman started the story, then her 13 year old son finished writing it.