All Comments on 'A Word in June'

Different style, different tone, different register, begs to be reread to see what you missed on the first quick skim: deserves the green'E',big time. Congratulations, (hint of jealousy)

Excellent! Loved the style, how it goes from past to present, to different subplots. Congrats on the "E". It is well deserved.

Excellent! Loved the style, how it goes from past to present, to different subplots. Congrats on the "E". It is well deserved.

At first this story promised to be a line-up of sexual experiences - hot in their way, but seeking a reason for being tegether as a story. My initial impressions were wrong. Further reading revealed the sexual perfection of a relationship as it developed then soured slightly; it told of all the joys that once were and could have been in the future. A fascinating read and a hot one too. Congratulations!

A very interesting, thought provoking story (never thought I'd be typing that on literotica). Very hot and sexy while at the same time bitter sweet.

I've tried to make sense of the flow of the early part of this story but have so far failed. Most of the following fragments seem to fit together but there is no mention of the girl in part one in them, or am I still missing something? The female character is not portrayed as a very nice person but I presume that is intentional?

This is one hell of a story. Creative, descriptive and raw. Well done!