by Cathleen
What a great story.......am looking forward to more of your writings. THANK YOU!!!!!!
Cate, that was great, just the romance I needed to read about, cant wait to find out more about Kara and Ken. Hope they have a long and healthy romance!
Thought it was very nice story, erotic too which i didn't think it was going to be, but hey, you proved me wrong. hope to read some more of your work.
alicexxx
[color=blue][size=+1]A Writer Meets a Reader by Cathleen
[i]WHAT I LIKED:Just an enjoyable hobby becomes so much more than that when her writing sparks a new romance!
POINT of VIEW:A classic, easy to read third person here. Nice job!
MECHANICS/ATMOSPHERE:No errors in spelling or grammar either,
A wonderful array of sensually erotic stuations, from a cozy home, to a quaint cafe, ending up in a fabulous upscale condo in the outskirts of Boston.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS:I know you COULD have turned up the heat on this one, but it was better left just as romance, like it is.
Once again, Cathleen, you have impressed me with your talent and writing skills and I look eagerly forward to experiencing your stuff again.
Merry meet, Merry part
The One and Only CrichtonDog,
I'd love to meet you sometime soon!