All Comments on 'A Young Boy Remembers'

And very well told. I loved the remembrance at the end. I could almost imagine the slight smile on his face as he said those words.

And very well presented. A neat tale with a little nostalgic feeling and not quite what you expect.

A very enjoyable story!

I loved your story!

Boyd

Simple story, lovingly written

I really enjoyed this story. It was intense and really interesting. You write well, and your paragraphs are not too long. A few maybe,but not bad. I think you have great potential. And will go far.

A very nice recount of your youth (if autobiographical). A gentle nostalgia which leaves one with an ache in their heart. Excellent weaving of sweetness and sadness.

That's a life time. There is a chance coming and going. Your story is very simple but great. I love to read it. Thank you for this great story.