by Hellen_S
the idea was really good, but it was so painfull to read that i couldn't get through the story...i thought you said you had someone help you...it doesnt show.
I loved this story and wante to give you positive feedback.
I cannot undestand why people can be so critical of bad grammer, especially as you are not writing in your first language.
Thanks for your stories.
I read the whole story (all parts). At first I was put off by your grammar, but then I read in your Bio that you a Greek(Love the Greeks BTW) and that English is not your language. This knowledge kind of made your pentameter endearing. I will read the rest of your stories. I will vote in each chapter you submitted for Ahh, I'm nude in public. Thanks for all of your effort....Pat (knotz2u@yahoo.com)