All Comments on 'Aaah! I Am Nude In Public 1 & 2'

by Hellen_S

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
grammer please

the idea was really good, but it was so painfull to read that i couldn't get through the story...i thought you said you had someone help you...it doesnt show.

DrunksDrunksalmost 15 years ago
Great story

I loved this story and wante to give you positive feedback.

I cannot undestand why people can be so critical of bad grammer, especially as you are not writing in your first language.

Thanks for your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Great story.

I read the whole story (all parts). At first I was put off by your grammar, but then I read in your Bio that you a Greek(Love the Greeks BTW) and that English is not your language. This knowledge kind of made your pentameter endearing. I will read the rest of your stories. I will vote in each chapter you submitted for Ahh, I'm nude in public. Thanks for all of your effort....Pat (knotz2u@yahoo.com)

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