All Comments on 'Aablar the Neanderthal Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
From an English bitch

This is a great story of powerful women and strong men. I loved it!

jott50jott50over 9 years ago
hottest scene so far.

gonna make those bitches his cum sluts...breed a race of warriors

MissesthebeachMissesthebeachover 8 years ago
Loyalty rewarded

Feeling sympathy for Leia. That should have been her honor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice sci-fy story

Your writing is very good dear.

Your story is deployed nicely around characters, and their sexual meeting.

Sincerely,

Elias

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