by S21K73
I love your style, the rich descriptions, and the fact that you go deep into the character's heads without seeming overindulgent. Though very little is said, the personalities of the two come though very strongly. Bravo.
More, more, more, pretty, pretty please! Add a third chapter, where they fuck each other.
This is the second, I believe, that I've read this story and it still got me hot and bothered. Pleeeaaaase write another chapter, please?