All Comments on 'Aaron to Ashley'

Nice stard...can't wait for chapter2... Hope the became more than just a one night thing and that James doesn't mess with them

loved it and can't wait to see what is next for ashley.

I was hard from beginning to end.

PS you might want to get an editor to help you polish spelling and puctuation.

i wa hard from start to finish i got part way thru and was so horny i got dressed myself and got my vibe out plz write more ( cowboy5548 yahoo instant msgr )

Yum Yum-RAM IT UP HIS BUM!!!

But you definitely need to achieve at least a basic standard in your writing to stop it distracting from the story.

This is the story i've fantasized a hundred times! Please write more. I agree you could use an editor but your description of dressing and sex is 2ND to none. 3 Full blown orgasms as you read this!!! OMG! Keep it cumming!!!

My title has it all.

If you can not be bothered with spelling, puncuation and simple english, do not bother to try to write.

At the minimum have some one proof read your work.

I feel that the poor spelling and lack of proper punctuation made the story more credible. The narrator/main character is a teenager, the story is written like a teenager wrote it.

I liked it 2. I am just 4 years older than Ashley and have been dressing since I was 12. I would have LOVED 2 have had a friend insisting on dressing me up like that. It was fun reading this story in bra panties and a little dress.

:-)

Cherie

I loved this story ! I was all tingly all the way through. Ashley is just soooooo hot!

Please write another chapter x

Only a few pages into the story and had to stop. To hard to read.

Hey, I just wanted to commend you for a hot story! It's now one of my favorites! As a fellow author, I've dealt with the nasty comments of those who don't post a darn thing. Sure, you can use a spell-check, but the most important thing is the realism of giving yourself to another man. Wow! PLEASE CONTINUE!

I wish something like that had happened to me when I was a teen. A friend dressing me for Halloween then some guy hitting on me.

When I was a teen I was also very tiny. At 18 I was 5'7" and only 120lbs and fit into girl cloths very good. I just didn't have the nerve to go out at Halloween dressed up. I wish a female friend had done that to me.

It honestly seems like a good story, BUT there were a lot of spelling and grammar errors. Enough so that I was a bit lost at some points. My suggestion is to spell check and re-read over the story after you've finished it and double check your spelling and grammar.

I would love to be Ashley.

Incredibly hot! Extremely excited there is a Chapter 2.

Love this story

I enjoyed your story I even had a orgasm while reading it ...Thanx Hun