All Comments on 'Aaron's Absolution'

I haven't read a story like this in a long time. It totally consumed me. I felt like I was there in Aarons place... Please continue with the story and your efforts... Excellent Job

Roger

NY

You need to learn the difference between "here, here", which is what you wrote, and "hear, hear", which is what you meant.

. . . with the intent of the previous comment. You need to learn more about the mechanics of writig and grammar. Then, please, submit some more. Tnx.

I thought your story was outstanding. But I continue to be annoyed by those who offer nothing but negative comments about someone else's efforts. I'm talking about those who are so quick to criticize another's work, and then in their own written "critical analysis" manage to repeat the same things for which they find fault in the writings of others. Shame, shame on you! Who are you to call the kettle black, huh? You seem to be only capable of dwelling on narrowness! I thoroughly enjoy your style, Randy Randy, and encourage you to contiue writing. You are 100% fun to read!

I don't think I would have done that. What I've always been told is that soap in side a woman's cunt burns her. Please correct me if I'm wrong! Otherwise, a ally good. Read.