All Comments on 'Aayla and Artemis Ch. 01'

I really prefer a more traditional story-telling format. This format is kind of lacking in warmth and intimacy. We have to interpolate the emotions and internal dialogue that might be provided by an actor interpreting the role, except that we, unlike the author, won't know until the end what a character's perspective really is.

i liked it. different style. good but different. chapter two please.

Write som mo please

a little different than what im used to but as the story progressed i learned to love it. good job i want part two