All Comments on 'Abby and Max - First Experiences'

i can see this story becoming a big successful series here on literotica!

I really hope you plan on serializing this and making them a real exclusive couple down the road. An instant 5!

Absolutely one of the best I’ve read on here 5/5

very erotic, sexy. great writing. i hope there a lot more to come

My comment, FINALLY!!! Cum in the pussy as nature intended, NOT! on tits ass tummy face. SAY IT, in the pussy in the pussy...

from great writers such as yours should get to the hall of fame

such as sibling romances you've written needed sequel badly too...one helluva writer like you deserves a spot on the hall of fame...give us more

Now that you have published two quickies and a slightly longer one, would you consider expanding your repertoire? I have found that the best stories in this genre take time to build up to the sex. They are definitely not one handed reading material. Rather, they are usually quite tender and perhaps could best be termed sibcest romances. Additionally, sex is most often limited to the sibcest couple. Put differently, they are always erotic but seldom pornographic.

Good story, enjoyed it a lot.

5/5

Okay story. Abby was too much of a slut for me. 3*