All Comments on 'Abby Ch. 12'

Woody, eh? Hmmmmm.........

He wouldt happen to be her father......

add one more interesting local to the mix

There is an indulgent pleasure in reading through this, the meter of the sentences and phrasing changes to suit the mood and character perfectly, along with a vocabulary that contains rare and wonderful words & phrases like “bole” and “droit de seigneur”. Make no mistake, this is a diamond of a story.

Many thanks for writing and posting this on Lit, fingers crossed you’re writing professionally somewhere these days Kezza. Cheers Ppfzz.