All Comments on 'Abby Ch. 24'

Whom is manipulating whom. At least there are no ill-intentioned people in the cast now that Abby left London.

I agree, the plot is simmering away quite nicely. And best of all, still a whole bunch more of chapters to be dropped into the kettle!

I have just worked my way through your submissions finishing with reading Abby in 2 sessions. It would be helpful if the longer stories that are originally posted in chapters could be combined to save going backwards and forwards for the next chapter.

Having said that your stories are intriguing and you spin the yarn nicely. You clearly have a detailed knowledge of South West England which you use well to colour your stories. You also leave lots of opportunities for follow up tales particularly out of Abby. For example "what was the first promise that Woody broke that caused him to become a recluse". Unfortunately from your comments at the end of Abby you suggest that your future output will be limited. I hope this is not true.

I hope you are right

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