All Comments on 'Abby's Surprise'

It makes a change to see a cross dress/transgender story that is straight and I enjoyed it...

Please write more...

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What. a story you started. That was a great beginning and to have a novice, her mom and aunt to guide her as she begins her sexual learning. I loved the tranny fucking her niece and mom helping. The possibilities of this 3 way are enormous.

I liked your story and felt you had just enough information, generated enough interest so readers would stay with it until you got to the point of letting out the secret about Aunt Gina. The only item is that Aunt Gina's cock could have been wider since it wasn't that long; that way it gives more opportunities to build interest and different options for a future chapter. Just a comment constructively from a very experienced reader. Good Job. Cannot wait for chapter 2. Thank you.

a very good theme...needs to be developed further...

Over all it was a good story. Enough information to get/keep the reader interested and explain who, why, and how, but just. I think it could have been better if you had flushed it out more. Everything happens rather too quickly. Wham, bam, thank you mamm, so to speak.

That was hot! Good story line.

that was very good I really enjoyed it something beautiful about mum and daughter getting together sexually