by silent_one__
I wonder why I can find a good amount of stories about men having anal babies but none of shemales having anal babies....
It is written in a mixture of present tense, which is very distracting and caused me to skip forward a lot. All the descriptions are clinical and not the least bit erotic.
With a serious overhaul by an editor, it might be readable. Otherwise, it just wasn't fun to read.
I absolutely love Mpreg stories! I just wish this site had more of them. This is a good story and i'd like to see it continue.