All Comments on 'Abduction'

by Marcus_LeBlanc

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

You really ought to get the physical positioning of your victim correct. Some of the things you describe in your story are, at best, backwards. Furthermore, noting erotic about this story

sigafoossigafoosover 12 years ago
Full of It!

Anonymous poster, below, is full of crap. The story is erotic as hell. If he/she is not into BDSM, why read it in the first place?

Isn't it amazing that such comments are always anonymous?

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