All Comments on 'Abduction Ch. 01'

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Scotchman1958Scotchman1958over 12 years ago
RAW SEX!

I love it! Raw, unbridled fucking! The helpless girl fucked into submission by her captors and loving it!

wilhelmrosenkrantzwilhelmrosenkrantzover 11 years ago
To the point - literally

Very wham, bam! A promising premise. Brevity is always desirable, so the story has that advantage. And a delicious scenario - a naked girl strapped down for all sorts of very naughty naughtiness. If criticism there must be the action seemed to jump forward quite quickly, but that aside the story set out to do what it intended. Thank you for writing, madam.

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