All Comments on 'Abduction Pt. 01'

But. . .I feel like we skipped so much, and the stuff that is missing is interesting. I'll be curious to see what others think, but it seems like readers generally like to see the process of how someone becomes controlled. This skips to the end and left me wanting an explanation.

I understand KindAsCake's comments, but I was so completely taken by the description of what was happening to the girls, I guess I got my own mind controlled a bit.

You have consistently been able to describe activity in a way that is always provocative and arousing. I'm envious.

Eager to see how the story continues.

The combination of a mind control kink and what seems to be a schoolgirl or maybe even underage/pedophilia kink puzzles me. It's...unusual.

This is not an erotic story. Intense rape themes, mind control and control freaks. What part of this story should we like. I suspect the characters will like to be raped eventually. I'll pass on this story.

Most of the comments below are correct I do not have one to add.

Not my cup of tea. But I'll read the next chapter before I retire this series. It will be interesting to see what comes next.

I LOVED this!

My go to fantasy for a lovely Jilling off.

My pussy My being thanks you!

Looking forward to part 2 , after a nap.