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All Comments on 'Abnormal Side Effects'

by largesquemannaries

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GrobnarGrobnaralmost 9 years ago
Solid Story

I think you have quite the solid story here. I think my one observation is that it is over too fast. This could easily be stretched out quite a bit. Excellent work!

KenGoreKenGoreover 8 years ago

This story was good and very well written. When I got to the end, one word screamed out in my head: SEQUEL!!!

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