All Comments on 'About Vania'

by mughalpunjabi

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I want Vania

What a lovely story; I like the way you built it up. Vania sounds phenomenal. Any chance of more on her in next stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Loved it!

Great one...

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Fantastic !!

WHat a greatstory - well constructed and beautifully written. Light on the graphic sex but very entertaining.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great!!!

Well written and extrmely erotic...very realistic, it it true by any chance

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
score

fabulous

nuff said

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
wah jee wah

wah jee wah

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
zabardast

zabardast yar.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
nice stuff

erotic and sexy, hope to get to read more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great

nice work, only if you could go into mainstream writing!, sigh, we would have met one day.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
EXCELLENT, EXCELLENT, EXCELLENT: SLOW BUILDUP BUT THE STORY IS CHARGED WITH EROTICISM; IF YOU LIKE THE GENRE AND ARE READY TO READ 4 PAGES THIS IS A MUST-READ FOR YOU

A while back, I worked in the Middle East for almost 6 years: you depict the life there very, very well.

As a young man I spent 5 weeks travelling throughout the Sub-Continent.

You brought Vania's character to life. You depicted so asterfully whe way she can tease a man knowing full well he cannot take full advantage of the situation.

Years ago, in British Columbia, I myself fell in love with a woman like Vania. I don't even know whether it was love or i was so intensely infatuated that i could not think of any other woman... but then what's the difference. For you at the time she is the prettiest & the sexiest & the most charming woman in the world!

Bravissimo!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
☆☆☆☆ (4 stars)

Farah would be my first choice!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
I REALLY LIKED THE STORY MARKED IT 5- (4.55/5.0 = 91% = A)

:-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟- (5-)!

:-)

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