by mughalpunjabi
What a lovely story; I like the way you built it up. Vania sounds phenomenal. Any chance of more on her in next stories.
WHat a greatstory - well constructed and beautifully written. Light on the graphic sex but very entertaining.
Well written and extrmely erotic...very realistic, it it true by any chance
nice work, only if you could go into mainstream writing!, sigh, we would have met one day.
A while back, I worked in the Middle East for almost 6 years: you depict the life there very, very well.
As a young man I spent 5 weeks travelling throughout the Sub-Continent.
You brought Vania's character to life. You depicted so asterfully whe way she can tease a man knowing full well he cannot take full advantage of the situation.
Years ago, in British Columbia, I myself fell in love with a woman like Vania. I don't even know whether it was love or i was so intensely infatuated that i could not think of any other woman... but then what's the difference. For you at the time she is the prettiest & the sexiest & the most charming woman in the world!
Bravissimo!