All Comments on 'Above an Alpha Ch. 05'

ok.. not sure what was with the first part of the this chapter.. Guess it was retelling of an old story. Perhaps in connection with Leah herself?

a very good story,and i really believe that leah and adria are one and the same person, this story that leah tells about is really about herself and not someone else,and also i think that trent might somehow be part of the story she tells the others,i'm just not sure who in the story.

awesome more please

the story is good but you are dragging it out to far without getting to any sort of point

for what it's worth, Leah is the little sister, because she's the "L" that comes after all the boys--B-K.

I'm having fun reading this. Don't stop. And I want to hear more of A's story as well.

Demanding, aren't I.

Her character is so awesome.

:D

Please do not kill off Trent!

i know i commented about it before,but im still going with my first thought about this whole mates problem,which is i think that leah and trent are mates. i mean trent was the first to realize that she was his mate before mark even knew she was there at their compound,so it makes sense that it would be trent not mark. its only my opinion/guess of what will happen.

the flow of the chapter is a bit off for me.

I hope you can tighten it up for your next post.

other then few small issues this is so much FUN to read!!! Luv all your characters!!!! and the plots super interesting too!!! More!!!

Did someone drop Mark on his head when he was a baby? He just doesn't seem too bright.

I have lost total track of what this story is and where it is going. It is just way too confusing for me to follow anymore. I just do not get it? good luck with your story and others in the future.

Hey, just found this story, I am enjoying it but can you not get us confused at some points.

I love this please finish the story!!! I am hooked!! I LOV IT dont stop yet finish i cant wait to see wht Leah has in store for Mark Mark Masters. Trent and Leah are made for each other love both of their characters

Please hurry

Next chapter please!!!!!

Hey, just wanted to know if there will be anymore chapters? I hope so, please don't make us wait to long.

I really hope your not going to leave us hanging, I'm completely sucked in!

It seems that you are gonna be 1 of those authors that is going to make their fans wait a while. Pitty cause I like this story, just don't do so great with the waiting. I am a patient person, its just that a lot of authors are making us wait so long or just gave up without telling their fans.

Sorry - got really, really sick in January and life is just now getting back in order as a result. I do plan on posting more soon.

I'm looking forward to the rest of this story, and am honestly relieved you're back and intend to finish. You've got a great talent and I really enjoy reading your work.

I am such a fan of your quirky characters and story line! They are relatable,you know...as far as realistic werewolves,vampires,etc can be,and humorous. I really hope you are going to continue soon. Any chance for an update?

The characters are generally fine except that Mark doesn't really behave like an Alpha and Leah is downright bossy (and unattractive to a degree). Overall its a good read.

i cant wait!

This story is great, and it's just wrong to make your readers wait for more than an entire year.