All Comments on 'Abusing Aunty Mary'

Not erotic at all..........more like the semi-retarded drivel you find at the Kristen Archives.

This needs to be filed under FETISH...pissing and other stuff like that. You really should have someone proof read your story before you submit it.

A story like this does not belong here, is this website not reserved for erotic stories?

A turd remains a turd and this "story" is it!!! What is the next? Golden showers? You are truly disgusting!

Always nice to see how many people you can offend with a single story! Scat isn't my thing, but it's your story, go for it. Americans are notoriously coy about bodily functions, anyway. It's true the proof-reading could have been better, but who cares? I knew what you were trying to say :-)

fantastic story. would love to hear more. im glad someone had the balls to write what they feel. thankyou and good luck to you. now what about a sequel?????

Can't wait to read more. Hope there is more.

I thought you were writing an erotic incest story. The previous post was right this should have been under Fetish. It was slow and just starting to be good until you got of on and into pissing. Next time take a minute to decide what catagory you want.

crap

I loved that story i really hope there is another part to it :)

sexy,

a bit disgusting

and funny at the end,

good job :)

Not one of my usual reads but a well written story nevertheless. For me there is only one question, what happened next???

Keep writing it's good to know there's a writer living near to me, I'm in cheshire

I love piss stories and piss play... golden enemas are awesome, both giving and getting... keep it going!

Have to agree with some comments, not my usual read. Absolutely brilliant, can't wait for the second part. What will wifey do...