Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'Abyss: Darkness Descends'

by FreeSpirited13

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 3 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Please keep it up. I'd love to see where it goes. A few grammatical errors, but nothing horrific. :)

ariesgirlariesgirlover 10 years ago

Good start with small amount of errors.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great Start!!

No major grammatical issues. Just one or two here and there. Really good start. Hope you carry on soon.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES

Abyss: Darkness Descends Ch. 02 Next Part
Abyss Series Info