All Comments on 'Accept the Unexpected'

A strong story with strong characters. Thanks so much for sharing it with us. You made me cry!

Good read, but somehow it left me feeling like it was brought to an end quickly. I would have like to have had the end (from her death on) to have greater detail like the rest of the story... Sorry, just my opinion... other than that, it's a great read!

on your 1st submission. Keep up the good works. TK U MLJ LV NV

what an excellent read! made my day! great first submission!

I am not a writer but I know what I like when reading stories. This story flowed well and held my interest without getting bored. In my opinion it was a 5 star effort. Whenever you can write a story that leaves this old man with tears flowing at the end you have accomplished your goal.

I checked your boi and note this is your first effort on Eroticia and find that very hard to believe. You obviously have placed stories in other venues??

Please keep writing and I will watch for more.

I have to echo the praise, truly outstanding diction, worthwhile read:)

well written and i loved it from the start. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

Author did an awesome job of developing his characters in a short amount of time, thouroghly enjoyed the story. Keep up the good work.

Thanks to everyone for taking the time to read my first story. Your appreciation is very encouraging. I welcome all comments so I can learn and improve for any future efforts. Thanks again..

Best of the contest entries I have read so far.

Your weakness is Sudden Change Syndrome - the writer changes the status without transitions. As well as you wrote this, it could have been so much better with a little more time to hide the unexpected and to make it truly unexpected.

still, it was good.

made me laugh, cry and get excited all in the same story...not many do that ...i cant believe that this was the writers first story..i hope there are more to cum

I Read This One After Your Latest . Made me cry like a bawling pup .The other story was good got 5*'s on the ex-pirate but this one isn't even close to that one if I could give you 10*'s it wouldn't be enough . Thanks for the read

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