All Comments on 'Accepting Her for Dad'

Awesome story!!! So close to perfection!! Have someone edit for the occasional grammar error and spelling mistakes and you will have a 5 star winner!!

Please add more chapters this was a great read. Excellent writing

I can't recall ever before reading a story where the dad's lover seduces dad and daughter to get together for the first time. Simply amazing.

Yeah, there were a couple of typos, but they are easily overlooked considering how good the story was. Heck, I just finished reading a professionally edited and published novel that had some typos, so no one is perfect 100% of the time.

I was particularly amused by the use of "you're" instead of "your". That mistake is usually made the other way around.

Still, I didn't want the story to end. The question remains, Cindy had always used condoms with her boyfriends, but was she on the pill, too, when her daddy unloaded in her cunt? And Cindy has yet to sample Lauren's pussy, with and without dad's added creamy goodness. Perhaps there's fodder for a sequel?

Great story add chapters will read if you di

One of the best stories in this category that I've read in quite a while. Very exciting. A very good read.

But as pointed out by RapidResponder, there were numerous of typos, and grammatical errors that one section I ended up rereading it twice before I finally grasped your intent. But still a great story which I enjoyed.

In your biography, you mentioned a more novel length work that is published on another website. Would you be willing to send me an email with the link?

But I've added you as a favourite author and am eager to following your growth as an author. You have my continuing

Best Regards,

Story, I was hooked from the start, Laurel is one smart lady she's going to have the best of both worlds as is Cindy and her dad.

More girl/girl action in the next chapters.

very very hot

So thankful i stumbled upon this. This is the first story ive even commented on and ive read tons!!

Ah, that title probably sounds underwhelming but I really, really, really did enjoy this! There were a few typos and such so the story could have benefited from a reread before publishing, but it didn't take anything away. I really loved the build up between Cindy and her father, like the tension was just "aaahhhhh". I also really liked the scenario of the father's girlfriend seducing both parties.

The lucky fucker, what would I not give to be up to my balls and tonsils in these two gorgeous cunts. Just love fucking cunt and eating cunt at the same time, also watching the girls eating each other. Cunt lapping sex maniac, lanc's uk.

Where are Cindy, her father and Laurel going next? I liked what you have in this chapter and now.... since all of Cindy's doubt has been removed, I think it will be fun to see what this "family" is going to do with their new found liberty.

Thanks for sharing!

RecHiker

I really enjoyed your story. I hope that there will be sequels...

Wow... This is one hot, sexy story. One of the best I've read on the site. Great pacing and descriptions. I'd join the chorus of "give us more", but I don't want to ruin something so perfect.

Beautifully slow and sexy build up.. This is what a 5⭐️ Story reads like! Thank you, please don't stop sharing your amazing fantasies ( or memories?!) with us!

I really enjoyed this story, but some things seemed a bit off. Shes had sex before but never gave a blowjob? despite some minor issues, I think this story is really great. Sequel please:]

Now, THAT was a hot read.

My thanks to the author.

Great story !

Really hope you are planning a sequel.

Great read , 4 pages not enough,, yeh sequal is a must plz

Such a fantastic story!! Well written. This is a fantasy I use quite often when I'm pleasuring myself, so I'll certainly be using material from your story for awhile :-) Thank you!!

I loved every minute of this story and think it had a perfect ending!!! Write some more!!!

Sick!!!

Wow, that was really amazing! I'd rate it 4.5/5! :D

The only reason I cannot give it 5/5 is because all other stories I've given maximum have been stories with a complex and detailed background story, with several smaller sub-stories (not necessarily about sex, but sometimes just about the relationships of the characters), that all form a whole to support the main plot (which, again is not about sex, but the interactions and relationships of the characters).

I'm in no way saying that it is bad (I DID just rate it 4/5), but when reading it I felt that the sex was more the goal of the story, than a tool to reach the goal of the story, especially during the last page. And just to prove how well written I this the story is I think I'll tell you something: I have, as of yet, never given a story just about sex more than two stars...

And I felt that there was enough additional story to easily make it worth four stars. However, unlike many other commentors here, I don't think it would work with a sequel, at least it is going to be very difficult to make one that is anywhere near as good as this.

So exciting there has tone part 2

What a hot sexy story! I was so wet the entire time and I had two very nice O's...thank you very much! ;) I was able to do that as I pictured the scene. I gave you a 4 rating because an editor could help you combine some of the sentences to make it flow better. It was too stop start stop start for me to give it a 5. But editing as I mentioned would have gotten this story a 5+ from me so I hope this positive criticism will help your future writing. Take care...Cheryl :)

You need an editor....great story, but your grasp of sentence structure is very distracting. If there's a part 2, have it edited.

I really enjoyed this. Short sentences are not a problem for me and I did not notice them. Some writers like to write that way. Plausibility is critical to me and the time you took to show everyone edging closer and closer to the surrender moment was exciting and tender. Perhaps the final surrender was a bit sudden in the end but I'm being picky and it's the most difficult part of the story to get right anyway. Loved it and I am looking forward to checking out your other stories soon. Need a cold shower and a lie down first. H

It's so rare to find an incest story where a third party is coaxing and seducing family members to fuck. Its very hot. Hopefully you have a mother/son version too...

Bravo Bravo we need a part 2.

This was one story that I didn't want to end .... It covered most things that turn me on , top on the list being Voyeurism & Incest.

The typos were a lil distracting but by then blood has flowed downwards :-)

And by popular appeal - a sequel please Miss Fun

Dear Imstillfun,

This piece (Accepting Her for Dad) is such a great piece. Love the detail, and we so much enjoy a piece where one is allowed access to the protagonists thoughts, very delicious. We will savor the rest of your work taking time to linger over the words, the thoughts and really work to understand the emotion of the characters, to take the characters on a process of guided discovery. So far we are delighted and look forward to hours of mental foreplay as we allow your work to slip over our mental taste buds so we can try to be you as you created these works, so we can maybe feel your passion as you created your work.

Look forward to being engulfed in more of you work as we travel through your mind.

Respectfully,

Debbie & Soami

I'll bet you do. Once a cheater, always a cheater, they say. You do in in Loving Wives, why wouldn't you here? Just an insecure piece of shit that can't stand the idea that everyone hates your stories, so you cheat.

Erotic another naughty sexy story

Wowww ....this, to me is erotic art!

I enjoyed every single phrase. I would enjoy some more parts of this story ...

Keep up the good wrok

I usually favor the romance angle with these incest stories but this was just so fucking hot. Great read, I hope you write many more that are just as good!

What a fantastic well told hot little story. Thank you.

This is one of the best suck and fucking incestual father daughter lesbianistic realistic clitoralistic pussy and big throbbing cock, lovely ass, and beautiful tasty tit stories I've read here yet.

I am a fan of your stuff. So what there were a few typos. The most difficult thing for me was keeping my concentration, with my iPhone in my left hand and three fingers from my right hand buried deep in my vagina.

Three orgasms received, 5 stars given. Cindy's fantasy and reality is shared by many a girl going through the transition to womanhood.

My father and uncles provided the mind picture for many masturbatory dreams between 13 and 18 for me. Great job xxx

This....was.....AWESOME!!!!!!!.....sexy....hot.....

This shit should come with permanent 1* !!

another truly beautiful comment form the asshole of LIT, dear annony!!! Eat shit asshole

And highly innovative. A storyline with great potential. An easy ***** read.

You have a Talent to keep your readers glued to the end! I love every one of your stories...I have an Incest Fetish and you feed it Greatly!

This was a VERY sexy story! Well done!!

What a fabulously sexy and erotic story. And very well told. A long, slow build up to a great sexual encounter.

Easily Five Stars!!!

I first read "Accepting Her For Dad" nearly a year ago. This time around I honestly enjoyed it just as much as before. That's the mark of really good writing and this is a fine example.

I'm glad to see you're still at the keyboard. Thanks!

What a great story, I just love the slow build up and then bang, it explodes into a hot sexy read. Keep up the good work.

very hot, and soo erotic, I just love your hot stories!

I have read a lot of erotic stories.. but yours are the best. Incredibly sexy and also very well written. Thanks

A very enjoyable - feel good story. So well written with a perfect balance between storyline, feelings, descriptive detail and highly erotic yet realistic sexual situations.

Thanks!

This is the first story of yours I've read. I love it I will be reading more.

This is the best story I have written in the category. I have read several and plan reading the rest of them. Please continue to write these well written tales. Thank you for the stories you have written.

That was great. It was very hot. It was well written. Had to give it a 5* vote.

I would rate it a 10 if the scoring went that high

I loved the slow buildup of this story. Makes it far more believable and the payoff that much sweeter.

Beautiful story, lots of love in the house, and exciting sex. Well written. X x

My third read. Thanks for sharing!

~F.S.B.

The numerous typographical, punctuation and grammatical errors make the reading a little ragged. Iamstillfun would benefit greatly from more careful and consistent proofreading and editing. That criticism isn't meant to detract from the emotional impact of the writing, but to hopefully improve the pleasure and ease of the reading.

Another 5.

It is great to read this early story. Your writing has come so far over the past few years. That said, there are hot, sexy elements that are part of your style. I love how Cindy's inner slut is emerging. The voyeur scenes are amazing. Laurel is a great coach for Cindy.

You have a wicked imagination and I like it! An excitable young girl and a mature lady taking control, what's not to like.

I particularly like how you kept the father's input (no pun intended) to a minimum. That made the situation all the more realistic and all the more erotic.

Congratulations on another five star story.

PS

Please forgive the arrogance of me giving you a tip, but write numbers with letters, not numerals. It's the correct form and it makes the read smoother.

One of the most erotic incest story ever written. I’ve watched my friend have sex with his sister and this lives up to the true reality of consensual loving incest. It does happen.

wow... really hot story. I liked the long, slow tease. Very well written. Thank you!

This is the best taboo story I've read . Great job I would love to see it as a movie.

I am not usually a reader of this genre, but I must admit...this is HAWT! Oh my goodness! Creative and imaginative awakening for Cindy...my hand in still in my panties.

This. Was. AMAZING.

I have read a lot of your stories but this I think is the best. Coming down after shooting my load here at work. Keep them cuming!!

Very good love story.Like to read more and watch the movie if made. Nicely written. Keep your readers happy and write more.

This is the best story I have read in a while. I would love to see a 2nd part to this

That slow build up makes you really care for the characters and hope that they can all find a way to be happy together by the end. Well done!

You do tell a tension building tale, the sex is hot, the love is tangible, ending satisfying. More stories of this trio is in order, please. 5*****.

A slow sensuous build up, to an amazing climax. Fantastic use of dialogue from Laurel, just at the right time to add to the boil.

This is a fantastic story, and very hot. Great dialogue and characters and wonderful build-up. Can't wait to read more of your work.

very good

I'm not interested in the Daddy/Daughter stuff, but I have to say that I thoroughly enjoyed this one, It's probably the new girlfriend falling in love with both dad and daughter that did it for me. I'm a sappy romantic and the love is more important to me than the sex is. Brother/Sister incest is my favorite and I am pretty sure it's because I was an only child. Thanks for your wonderful story. 5/5

Hi again.

The incest part is not a turn on, but the way you describe, that she want to be fucked in front of a teen girl is hot, and I love their interactions.

And the sharing. I love the taste of my own cum and a hot girls pussy. Turned me on, totally.

I don't worry about the incest parts. It is just a STORY!!! I look at it as cute/sexy and damn enjoyable. Did I ever commit incest? No. Would I have if I had a sister?? Don't know. Would I screw my mother?? Hell no. But only because she was a shrew. I was glad to get out of the house.

An excellent rendering on a taboo subject, Lauren provided the perfect catalyst. And a damn sexy one at that.

So Good!!!

Very nice, loved it. It’s a great jack off read.

It’s what Literotica is all about. 5 stars!

Bill S.

Good stuff. A 5 many times over

Wow! your first for me...so hot...! easy 5/fave

neatly set up by Laurel

of course dad has a whopper, and can cum like an 18 yo, and daughter and gf are both 10's, and daughter happily discovers she's bi...

impressed by the number of H's you have-going to enjoy perusing...

This is top tier, as good as my favorite writers.

The SLUT real estate agent was just scouting for a single rich man.....bitch....

Wow, Laurel is hot, smart and bi. So is the daughter!

Great story!

HOT!! Every guys dream!!

Wow! Absolutely one of the best daddy daughter stories I have ever read. Wow! You know how to turn your readers on.

This is one of the best stories I have ever read. Please continue this story with a chapter 2!.!.!.!.

Absolutely a beautifully hot story

Soooo Hot! Great writing and thank you!

I thought this was terrific! Not something I usually read, but what a delight. Thank you.

Every story of your I read is better than the last! Laurel is fantastic. I love the way she encourages Cindy to give in to mutual lust, I love how she brazenly touches and then fucks dad in front of her... I love all of it!

This is by far the best father, lover, and daughter themed story on the Internet. Thank you for sharing your talents with us. 10 stars!

A sweet, happy story with real people? What's not to like?

This is the third time I have read this story and I find it just gets better and better. It got 5* the first time round, I wish I could give it more.

I'VE READ STORIES HERE SINCE 2000,

THIS IS MY FAVE!!!

OMGEEE, CUUUMM EVERYWHERE!!

Goody Goody Cum Drops!!

Great writing still!

What a sweet story!

so tender, so HOTTTTTTTTT.

This is so Incredibly loving, tender and FUCKING HOT!!!!!!!!!