All Comments on 'Accidental Confession'

finally a male with some balls

Know why I like your style of writing but I do. Thanks for sharing.

anon with testicle fetish gave me the creeps

There's no sport in this. No cat versus rat element. All too easy !

THE TRICK IS NOT GET COVERED/ tk u mlj lv nv

Fuck that cheating whore slut cunt. Maybe she'll die of aids. We can only hope.

OH YEAH

Great that relationship was over so fast. No need to spy on her for pictures and proof.

Also liked that hero of the tale did not marry someone else the next day.

Your stories are good and Iike that the people in them are just ordinary folks.

Thanks

this writer doesn't speak english as a first language. I can tell by the choppy writing.

Just more crap from this author, no story line, just a bunch of crap.

what a heap of rubbish!

What accident? What confession? I'm also creeped out by the fellow with the testicle fetish below... LOL

Story is shite.

"Many thanks to chilleywilley ... for the editing of this story."

If this was edited, I would have hated to read how BAD is was to start!!!

I stopped reading about five paragraphs into the story, it's just impossible to follow.

As you are not a native english speaker I suggest you get an editor that is.

Hurt? Yes, Pissed? Yes, Cool calm and collected? Definitely.

A strong man who said his piece, dumped the skank and kept moving forward. Enjoyed his response to her 'giving' him what was denied after the fact and he told her off.

Thank you!

M1

Winterfrog is a prolific writer in this category and CW has actually helped BUT is either also NOT a native Enlish speaker, OR is unwilling to change the 'flavor' of WF's stories (or is being ignored by WF!) This story, as is true of much of the WF portfolio, is fairly plain vanilla, with very limited erotic content! 3*

To commenters like the last few. Apparently you prefer stuff written in the queen's english, or maybe I should say the President's english. Winterfrog writes in an english dialect, and it is a legitimate thing to do. Yes it could be edited thoroughly to suit your narrow tastes, in fact you could do just that and save it on your computer, or even re-post it to show the world. However, the result wouldn't be a Winterfrog story,

Think about the Mona Lisa wearing a western shirt and a 'cow persons' hat. It might find great appreciation in some people's homes, maybe even in your home, but it wouldn't be the Mona Lisa..

You know how he writes, you know they are fun stories to read, just chill and don't worry that you are being ignored. It's not about you.

I gave it a 5

First, I acknowledge it's NOT about those who comment! 2nd: I've re-read my comment and apologize about 'Engish' - especially embarrassing given the content of the comment. 3rd: having re-read, I cannot get the criticism I received & share with a reader who stopped reading due to awkward phraseology. Should be obvious I am familiar enough w/WF to avoid his work if I hate it OR find it too difficult to read. 4. The 'flavor' of his work which I address includes his usage of the language (which is far superior to my usage of HIS language)! Last, my 3 star rating had much more to do with my 'vanilla' comment...your 5 stars seems to be influenced by your low regard for some of the comments. POSTSCRIPT - this does not need a reply, I almost never get into a 'comment-feuds' - they are non-productive AND (more important) disrespectful to other readers and the author!

If you think this is one of his better stories you either haven't read many of his other stories or you are dumb as a box of hammers. Like a flash story, the length makes it impossible to really develop plot, characters, etc.

Yeah powerful stuff, WF. Thanks for writing 3*.

Straightforward and realistic.

The simple method of dealing with the problem is enlightening. No one needs to get all bloody. Back when I was a youngster there would be bullets flying, but here the cultured Europeans ask them to leave and that is it....

Always an entertaining short story - ignore the grammar police who do not realize that your sharing your stories with us even though English is not your first language.

I liked it. And though short I think it stands up well in comparison to some of his longer stories. Great job WF

It's not because English is not your first language(at least I assume that to be the case) its because nothing really happens I had a fiancé found out she cheated, dumped her and got on with my life. The end.

There was no fleshing out of characters no reason to care and even though it was a short flash story that's no excuse for laziness.

Straight to the point and fast moving.

The story is a stand alone and complete story.

A good quick read and I enjoyed the story

Thanks for the read.

But nothing very special so 3*

She strayed...she paid. Good thing they hadn't married or produced children yet. Good tale...no wimp.

Ron Wood

and now I see why others have commented on your improved language skills in more recent stories.

Clean and to the point - thanks -

can be and is extremely painful. TK U MLJ LV NV

It is very difficult to meet the right one in this world

People are mostly liars and hide their real intention

I think i am a little bit lucky, because i met my hero on a dating site

http://www.erisdating.com or http://www.angelreturn.com do not be hopeless,

There are still nice and honest people who can give you the love you deserve

Life is short and it has no meaning without love...

Marry your sister.We fell in love when we were 18 and have been together 40 years.we have never looked at anyone else and ache when we are apart.Everyone I know is either unhappy or cheating on each other.And they say brother and sister romance is a sin and a crime.Well I will never go through the heart ache that others go through.My sister has been in love with me since she was 16 but I did not know.I found out when I was 18 when she told me,I had never had a girlfriend because no one could match up to her.

Helena Montana

On her 3rd husband

Black widow purple rose tattoos

Implanted breasts

Formerly a college instructor

Visit Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com to see why she lost that position

Husband knows but just keeps pressing cum-filled panties to his face while watching her bathe as he waits for Friday night bj

Her own mother told him to divorce the slut

and the outcome remains the same, TK U MLJ LV NV

VERY boring!

for once a wright awsenr no matter what never acept a woman who settles for you its just recipe for disaster

and then there is the big "IFs" TK U MLJ LV NV

story needs to be corrected. Need to get a proof reader for phrases and syntax. Will make the story flow better and make for better reading. It is obvious english is not your first language. Other than that the story believable and good.

Tom was an ambulance driver who drove a BMW, had a country club membership and wore Armani suits. Yea that seems normal. #1 TK

Read it again. It seems that cheating husbands want no part of a cheating, in this case, an engaged woman because they figure that they cheated before, they'll cheat again. Don't get me wrong. The wife of the cheating husband dumped him quick with no money for him. He is the total asshole here because he promised the other's fiancé that they would marry after the divorce and move in the big house but that was all a ruse to fuck her. So she's a confused slut and he's a fucking jerkoff prick. The innocent parties moved on with their life and they are fine.

Damn. I talk to much.

Because he is too much of a pussy to exact real revenge on a cheating whore.

At last a story about a man with some balls.

Only children think of revenge for an emotional injury. Just dump her and be done. Panther fan.

frozen to death several years later.

He was unable to find work and began to slide further into despair. One extremely cold winters night he drank too much cheap booze and while walking down an alley he slipped on some ice and hit his head. He was found the next morning stiff as a post.

The Ambulance crew that attended lamented the loss of a previously good Paramedic.

Everyone else in this story had reasonably successful lives.

with the cheating slut gone. BTB is only in stories. This one mirrored real life to the t.

BTB

I can appreciate that English isn't the author's primary language, but this story should have been filtered through someone who is strong in English. That was difficult to read.

Did anyone not notice the way she was talking to Tom on the landline while her husband was right there in the house?

I know we have to cut a HUGE slice of the suspension of disbelief pie (yes sorry 90% of you authors but you really stretch the credibility lines) but that call was ridiculous. Yes a few of the things being said would have made it ok but the depth of their conversation was just too much. Ruined it completely.

Hilarious to read a Frog story, but I do enjoy them.

It’s really hilarious to read a Frog story, but I do enjoy them.

Winterfrog is one of two the best BTB writers, No bull, straightforward, original plots, normal males, no sermons, no pontifications (aka "emotional dialogues").

Here and there his stories are weaker but even the weakest ones are better than 99% of the bull other BTB writers make.

Wife-lover phone call is unbelievable? Why? This is exactly how a foolish, in-love cheaters would behave. Cannot without hearing each other's voice and talk like teenagers in love. It is surely more believable than some of the BTB crap where demonic wife schemes and plots the demise of her husband while explaining the whole history of cheating for her hubby to hear through some ventilation ducts in the basement.

Got to love a man or woman that will not tolerate cheating.

Good job. I can't stand a cheating. Caught my girlfriend that I was about to ask to marry me. I went to her house she lived with her parents. I went unannounced to surprise her. I knocked on there door and Tammy her mother answered. Ted she said you can come right in. I asked is Jennifer here sure she's out on the back patio visiting with Tim. I thought her son Tim even though he was younger we were good buddies. Walking through the house Jennifer's dad Jack was watching TV I talked to him and asked his permission to marry Jennifer. He stood as he said yes with a hand shake and hugged. Then Tammy hugged me man that Tammy was something else wow. I sure hopped Jennifer would be as blessed as Tammy. I pulled out the ring box and started to show them but said I better show Jennifer first. Good thinking both said. I opened the patio door. Damn it you cheating I stopped there . Tim Jackson not her brother an arrogant ass that was in our class jumped up. He was all over her making out. Jennifer said OMG it's not what you think. How damn dumb do you think I am? I turned to leave. I didn't know that Jack and Tammy had followed me and Jack kind of pushed me out of the way and yelled at Tim telling him to get the Hell out of his house and never come back or he would kick his ass up between his shoulders and he would have to take his shirt off to shit. Tammy was yelling at Jennifer that she should be ashamed of herself and to in the house to the living room. Then Tammy asked Jack to take me to the office and she would come and get us after she had a talk with Jennifer. I spoke up and said I really appreciate it but if Jennifer doesn't love me and wants someone else that her choice. I was headed towards the door but didn't get very far when Jennifer grabbed me crying hysterically saying she did love me and only me and that she didn't know what just happened please give me another chance please. I said I need to think. She was looking at my hand I noticed that I still had the ring box in my hand. I just put in my pocket. Jack said come on we will be in the office. Tammy came later and then all 4 of us talked actually Jennifer and I said very little. We broke up neither dated anyone and very seldom went out. It took a while but we got back together and married we have 4 children. We feel blessed. A few days after I had seen Tim all over Jennifer he was running his mouth and I fired back at him enough to get him to swing at me first I thought I was ready and ducked but he just clipped my jaw. I swung with my left but followed quickly with the right and that one connected knocking the wind out of his sails. The dumb ass even tried once more about a week later. He missed me his first swing and I missed the first just clipped with the second and the third put him down.

I can't imagine how Tom thought he could get the house in a divorce. I suppose that he had made up an entire fantasy world to keep Linda in his bed.

WOW, grammar was atrocious. Obviously, English is not the author's primary language.

Not even close to enough payback to the cheating whore. Your writing style of no revenge against cheating sluts makes me think you have cuckish tendencies.

A fun read. I enjoyed the English mentally translated from another language. The tone and meanings come through clearly. Linda was completely busted and at least had the decency to confess and admit she loved another man more than her fiancé. Leif got his revenge on Tom by talking to Tom’s wife and it all ended matter-of-factly. Happily, Linda learned that cheaters are liars in every way and they don’t respect their unfaithful side-lovers because they know they are disloyal and untrustworthy and not someone to have a real relationship with or marry. Good job!

Your English really sucks and reading hard.

While I found your story interesting, even entertaining, it would have been much improved if proper English had been used!!! Please find a literate, English speaking, editor before you post anything more!!

Dumb fucking cunt.