by Turned
Stoping gay guys from writing loving wife stories. Why not just go gay all the way, I don't see you living a long or happy life like this, is being a submissive little useless bitch enough for you? I don't see how it could.
Loved Chapter 1.. Subtle, Slowly Developing and Hinted at an unusual cuckold scenario.. sorry to say chapter 2 was a huge letdown... I thought after chapter 1 it was headed in an accidental BDSM/Forced Cuckold situation... but alas it ended in cocknee accents and typical cuckold undertones..
Don't like where this is going. If it does, I would "turn" her around and kick her arse out of my house. She would be "turned" alright. Role playing can be fun, but crossing the thin line can let unwanted feelings break out. Just be careful girl.
This is well written and fun. The sex scenes are well done and have some heat to them. I suspect you'll have some trouble carrying this beginning scenario through to the end. Still, I'm looking forward to seeing you try.
Don't be so sensitive about negative comments -- all comments should be good. I haven't read your other stories because I was turned off by the themes (a black wife makes me think of Oprah!) but I was pleased to see that this one you said was going to be really long. It wasn't. Really long would be multiple chapters (many more than 2) each having 8+ parts. There are umpteen cuckold stories out there (I've read most of them or so it seems) with little originality and less depth. This unfortunately doesn't break the mold. You can't develop the characters in such a short story and that's the only way to hold the reader's interest.
How about a story where a girlfriend truly does miss interperate her partners "internet bowing history" and sets up what she thinks will be his ultimate fantasy but turns out to be the most emotionally painfull experience of his life....
Yes, another cuckold story. Don't like it then don't read. Drop your 1 bomb and leave. Constructive criticism is appreciated. Gay/bi/cuckold/wimp bashing – ignored. Blah, blah, blah, etc. etc. etc. On with the story -
you have all the faggs approval for your story and the bitch bi's, good for you they way you appeal the vial readers.hahahaha
She doesn't want him to leave her, but she has only allowed him to have sex with her a few times in the past year. Tell her that if she doesn't start providing him with regular, meaningful sex, he will leave her ass in California and find a woman more willing to have sex with him...even if he has to go back to his first wife. This bitch is batshit crazy.
"Ana, my dear wife, you spoke of your fear that I might leave you like I did my first wife. Well, dear wife, if you ever again lock me out of MY bedroom, I will walk right out that door and you will find yourself single and flipping burgers at McDonald's again. Sex between husband and wife is to be shared. It is a shared pleasurable experience, not a selfish experience enjoyed only by you." Then throw the other six numbered gifts in the trash and remove the tennis bracelet from her ankle and put it on her wrist where it belongs before she replaces you with a string of lovers. And cut off Lita's influence over Ana.