All Comments on 'Accidental Discovery'

This was great, and loved the ending!

Wow. Fantastic.

You had me going there for a minute until Dr gave himself away. Nice way to let your Assistant think she can have her way with You.

That was soo good and unexpected i just happend across your story. i really enjoyed and agree with the other review that it is good to see a girl in control. i really enjoyed your story.

Excellent! Well written, very erotic, great imagination, great description of sex in a way that a woman would like!

An actual story with well-written sex! Congratulations! There are only a handful of other writers on this website who have accomplished that. Good sense of characters with their physical description well integrated in the story. And you really have shown an understanding of what REALLY turns a woman on. Also, thank you for omitting incorrect synonyms and grammatical mistakes. That helps the reader stay IN the story. Thanks. - Xijaz

A nice change- the girl being in control. I like the suprize ending too.

So rawking! Cool original ending!

This was an original concept, and that is a rare thing indeed on Literotica. A great story from a gifted writer.

Well-written, extremely slow-burn and erotic. In many ways, it could have been placed in Erotic Couplings or even Romance, but in Mind Control, it totally leaves the reader open for that ending. A masterful work.