All Comments on 'Accidental Peep Show'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More!!

Great story, I love the set up, but I would like to know what Colette relation to the narrator seeing her show

SawjSawjover 8 years agoAuthor

I think it will be linked in with next story. Thank you very much for positive feedback so far :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
accidental peep show

Stupid.

The names are given...clearly. go with it You're not GUESSING that one is Michael, he IS Michael.

Go with it and don't try to be cute or coy. Unnecessary additional extra excessive useless uncalled for verbiage doesn't help the story.

tazz317tazz317over 8 years ago
WHO WAS WHO

and what was what. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Love this

More like this, please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I gave you a 4+ [(☆☆☆☆+) 4.4/5.0 = 88%] because the story line is original

I have had strong voyeur tendences since forever.

:-)

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