All Comments on 'Accidental Penetrations Ch. 01'

Fantastic keep up the good work.

Please continue this story line.

This is one of your best works yet my dear author and you have many good ones! I really would like to read more of what happens next! Good job!

More stories like this one, please. Dustin still has his big sister, his mother and Lily, along with two or three cousins to consummate with, possibly.

The story misses the mark. The fun of accidental penetration stories is orgasm denial and reluctance. You kill the fun if they immediately have sex. There's supposed to be accidental penetration, then pulling out and orgasm denial, rinse and repeat.

I'd go on with this story line. Actually, please, continue this story line //accidental or not//

Families should enjoy these types of vacations.

Not by Paganini but by "Alwaystaboo".

My vote is that you continue this storyline.

I could do with more.

The next morning they awoke to the sound of knocking. Mom and Dad were up wanting them to come down to breakfast. They hollered through the door they'd be down in a few minutes.

Dustin jumped from their shared bed to quickly pee, and figured a five minute shower was in order to hide the evidence of what had transpired.

As he was emerging he heard a female voice yell, "You did WHAT?"

It was Lily. She had come into their room and somehow figured out the truth, or at least the partial truth.

"I-she-um-SHIT!" Emily stuttered, as she buried her face in her hands.

"You fucked her? How could you,she's your sister!?" shouted Lily.

I was about to explain the accidental circumstances when I remembered her late night intrusion, and the whispers and kisses the twins shared.

"Apparently I'm not the only one." I stated calmly.

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Would love to see this story continue.

You should go on with this story.

We're the twins not sharing a rm and he with the older sister

Please continue this story!!!

Yes please continue this story after all you did call it ch.1

Please do continue!

Mom?

No way would he pull out just shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy

This is story land no VD or babies

Very good. Keep going.

Looking for Ch.2. Great work.

I liked the story telling of this chapter, but for the future chapters can you provide more details (measurements) on his family and himself. Creates a more vivid picture. Also will we see some more reluctant family members, maybe the mother perhaps?? Either way excited for chapter 2.

there's no way in hell I could have pulled out or even have lasted as long as this story seems to go for hours

Wow! Best story on here! MORE! Now he has to “accidentally” bang Lily. Then, Emi and Lil.

Your world needs to read through once more, but the errors weren't enough to kill it. BFF1

The other twin needs to catch them and be pissed that Emi got him first, or Emi didn't share... Dustin needs to make it up to Lily....

Or you probably can do a better job..

I love the way the story developed, and it reminds me of sex with my girl friend, when I was around 25 yr old. On holiday, and we shared the bed, had sex and then went to sleep, but during the night, I got an erection, and ended up fucking her

Love to see how it folds out, and how he going to fuck the rest of his sisters, and mum

Great story. Would love both a continuation to this story, and more accidental penetration stories.

He has 2 more sisters, a mom, a couple cousins and an aunt to duck! The week has just begun!

This is a fetish of mine I've had trouble finding content for. Please continue with the accidental penetrations, maybe for one or two occasions, the woman might not fully recognize her impalement or maybe she's all too aware and they for some reason can't untangle themselves while he's hard inside her. Long story short, I love this and would love to see more.

I'm with the others time to start going through the rest of his female family members. Maybe a play fight in the pool or no room in the hot tub except on brothers lap or we need to hurry and take this shower together so were not late for dinner. All would be got accidental moments or twins swap on him so Lily gets what Emily got.

Don’t stop now. Love all your stories so keep them coming. The accidental penetration is a cool theme that you should run with.

I loved this story, so erotic. Would love to hear more of this trip to the nudist camp. I'm sure Emily couldnt keep this secret from her sister/lover.

...provided you can figure out unique ways for Dustin to accidentally penetrate each of his other female family members (including the cousins). Even without any further "accidents", this story should continue. You took so much effort in describing the other family members that you can't leave us hanging and stop at just Emily.

I totally agree with the others. There's plenty of opportunity for the main character to have very pleasurable accidents. And the reactions might be interesting; very eager, not noticing (somehow), annoyed but let's him finish, or less than perfectly willing. Really hoping for another chapter. great work!

You can do it more.

families were like this one, the world would be a better place

I wouldn't mind seeing add to this one myself.

I, like you, always find these accidental penetration stories arousing while improbable. This unique take on the theme certainly caused a little dampness between my thighs. Keep it up (hehe) and there may be an “accidental” penetration happening at my house, too.

I was more of Destin fucking and making love to his sisters and cousins.

Making love and being tender.

Very entertaining and different story. Thanks for sharing.

I liked the flow of the story. It worked out great.

I love accidental penetrations especially if it's incest. Your story is amazing.

I love accidental penetrations stories because of the build-up and surprise element.

Unlike at least one other commenter I only see the incest as a tool to make things happen, and then possibly create interesting situations because of the need for secrecy. Maybe if I'd grown up with a sister close to my own age I'd feel differently.

I love sneaky sex.

Loved it just as much the second time.

WHO WILL BE NEXT?

And they are great fun with totally absurd situations and a subtle humour running through them.

If you don't take them too seriously and you enjoy the genre, I'm sure you'll enjoy this series.

I have 2 criticisms - There are a number of obvious errors across the 4 so I would suggest the author ask his editor to take a little more care. Although I still enjoyed it, part 3 would do better as stand alone episode in the Ongoing Mishaps of Dustin.

Really looking forward to further stories.

But you destroyed the story by telling the outcome at the start. No need to read any more as now know they have sex. Makes the rest of the story pointless.

God story, well writen, well done 👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾

As for homebody's comment about being told the end at the beginning isnt most stories that way and if they didnt have sex whats the point of the story derrrrrr !!

I enjoyed it for what it was and how it was portrayed, well done and thanks.

The story and contents are extremely more realistic then the retarded as fuck 18+ thing for the sake of the site with adults acting as teens

Pretty good. Personally only had one issue, and that's no one who is an actual sibling, calls eachother brother and sister. Siblings just use names. So I'd cut back on the whole 'Big brother' thing. Other than that, five stars. Keep writing.

Very good I would add that you need to keep at this. I watched a porn movies where the sister was getting out of the shower and the brother grabbed a towel she had in her hands they began to fight she fell on her bed when she lost control of the towel he fell on top of her and his dick slid into her. Was a very erotic porn movie one that I'd like to see you write about in a future story. Of course in your own style you have a very erotic mind and pen. Thank you

I want to see how they figured out guy and half set of twins wound up in same room with two beds. Simple enough to me would put twins in one room.

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Very good, 5 stars

Well written but no eroticism

Great story. Loved the way you described the sex. Now, this is why I like stories that are 2 to 3 pages max. Otherwise, there's too much build up and I'm skimming paragraphs to get past the BS. That crap brings the heat down considerably. 5*

Call it a fixation, but damn I love sibling sex. And twins….dated a twin my sophomore year of college, but wasn’t lucky enough for the switcheroo Nice lead up, but thought a tent scene was up for mom-son titillation 😁

This is the second story that you've pushed the "nudist colony" misconception, showing that you and your editor know no nudists, didn't bother researching anything about nudism, and don't want any real nudists reading this.

Three people told you about this on your other story that uses "nudist colony" as a title, and you didn't respond to any of them, remaining radio silent.

Why you keep wanting to push this offensive misconception and alienate any and all nudists who might want to read your work is baffling to me, but not as baffling as how you refuse to actually address your desire to push this misconception about nudists to the point your "nudist colony" story is even tagged with "colony" for some bizarre reason I can't think of anything good for.

Loved the first chapter from beginning to end. Very erotic all through and amazing sex deserving 5 stars from me. Great writing !

Excellent! Love these short and erotic stones. No need to skim through pages of bs. After all what do we want in a Lit story? Damn right! Sex, sex and dirty hard sex. And taboo sex is the best. And short stories gets you to the crucial point as quickly as possible. Keep it up.