All Comments on 'Accidental Summoning Ch. 03'

I love this story please keep writing. 5 Stars wish i could give it a hundred Stars.

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I just discovered this series. It's a rarity on Literorica - a very hot story, that is also interesting and intriguing as a STORY,

I look forward to more!

Best chapter yet, be nice if he made a significant contribution to the fight against the foe and be able to visit his sister ocationaly.

Enjoyed because the plot has deepened and now out weights the sex.

60% + plot story line to 40%- of sex maintains my interest

Eagerly awaiting the next installment, this story captivates my mind and captures my sensibilities.

Outstanding story line. While I like a good sex scene as much as the next person, I love a good story. Are you planning on continuing it? I would love to see how Paul fairs in the library.

This story is fantastic but, I've been waiting for an update since this chapter was released. Is there any plans for continuation and if so do you have an ETA?

Probably one of my top 3 stories on this site, please continue! I can’t wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the good work!

OMG good on you my friend. I can't wait to read more. There is so much more that can be done with this format. A giant pit with Tentacles monsters, a domination spells that forces him into a trance of continuous orgasms, giant slimes that induce large amounts of pleasure as they envelop you, or even elements of BDSM. Though of course with the character development you've done with Des, the BDSM would need to be implemented through another character. Anyways, just some ideas. Also on the story telling front it may be a good idea to give Paul's character a more pivotal role. Such as giving him an innate ability he never knew about to read and understand different languages intuitively. Anyways just some ideas!

Read this a couple of years ago a second reading suggests:

This deserves a part 2 with the 3 musketeers and father as Dartanyon

With more plot and a little less sex

You are amazing, nevermind writing the story, just all the characters alone would be daunting for most, and the creatures are characters, leaving that behind , the love and passion and love is melting me bad I'm becoming a bigger sap then usual, I love you!🥰