All Comments on 'Across the Tracks Ch. 04'

Please please do continue. this story is intriguing. I can't wait for the next chapter

Keep up the work, this story is very addicting and want to know what happens.

good story hope there is more soon

... fate is at work with those two. This is getting really good. I did get a little confused in two paragraphs where you didn't divide the dialogue(when her parents were talking and when Otis and his papaaw were talking) into seperate paragraphs, but read it carefully and no worries. I like the little details of his relationship with his Papaaw, and I suspect that you actually have a relationship like that because it was very real.