All Comments on 'Across the Tracks Ch. 08'

HOW COULD YOU DO THAT!!!!!!! Ahhhh. Hurry and post the next chapter! GR

I Got To Kno Wht Happen Next Plz Add More

Now you have to hurry with the next chapter. I can't stand the suspense.

the main characters are great and the ones like deke and firebird( to which either a side story or inclusion further in this one are to expected) along with dekes obvious war injuries( and as his thoughts where written, not all physical) that many branches and forks this story has

I stumbled across your absolute GEM of a story and fell in love with it.

It's one of the best I've ever read on here.

I can't wait for more!

Stop doing that, every chapter you leave it in an important moment, it is getting me crazy

AWESOME STORY 5 stars so far