All Comments on 'Acting the Part'

Very good! I look forward to your next story.

And lovely... But Tristan doesn't seem like a senior dramat. A sophomore, maybe. But a senior? Nooo. I did love the story. Well done and very erotic. Nicely told and great build. Your directors were perfect characters, too! You should tell this from their point of view next.

Just thanks.

I think this would be much, much sexier written in the first person.

Just my opinion. Try it and see if you agree.

Was sucked into this straight away! Is there going to be a sequel? Please? I'd love to find out what happens next with Tristan and Cole!

Not bad at all. Lots of times with stories in this genre, we see all sex and almost no build-up - no so here. Great work ratcheting up the tension; all of the daily teasing in drama practice really made you desperate for the release that finally came at the end. And the audience first with just the directors and actors and then with the whole crowd, just took things up another notch. Good pacing and inclusion of emotion without dampening the lust. Five stars.

I like it!

I love an inventive, original, thought! I would have never thought of such a scenario. Bravo!

This is one of my favourite erotic stories ever. I keep coming back to it every now and then.