All Comments on 'Actions Speak Louder Than Words'
by allisonfancy
- 41 Comments
EroticLitKittyover 11 years agoIn a female version of 'The Hangover' this is how I'd want it written. Well done First Timer! Can't wait for what's to come :-)
ILienBagbyover 11 years agoYou do what a good writer should do: First, you get us reading, then, you keep us reading, and, finally, you have us wanting more.....soon!
B_B_Bover 11 years agoSpeaking from the male perspective, only a wman can describe this experience.
You are wonderful! Keep it up!
Anonymousover 11 years agoPlease continue this story, it's an excellent start, can't wait to read what happens!
Anonymousover 11 years agoOne chapter in and I'm already loving it .Can't wait to read more : )
SilentStrengthover 11 years agoA little brief for my taste, yet.. complete. You put the foundations down for a great story. Adding to my favorites to check back for more.
Anonymousover 11 years agoI've never been to Africia and I'm not from there but we are considered African American because of the origins of out ancestors. So I do find that a valid statement. If you think about it "white" is a lump some description. Mediterranean is more accurate because it's the origin of that person's ancestors. Ask someone that's Italian about their ethnicity they are going to respond, I'm Italian not I'm white.
Anonymousover 11 years agoI can totally understand what he said about not being white cause most from the Mediterranean isn't white. I think most forget about the world history here cause he isn't white. The ancient Greek and Roman world people were more mixed than people today, and until a few hundred years ago ,that was how it was and that was normal. And yes they were mixed with Palestinians, Persians, Arabians, Africans, and Asians. Most from Spain,Italy, and Greek with the islands and countries that surround that area aren't white, just test there blood for there family history and you will be surprise at how mix they are. Try telling someone from that region that they are white and they will give you a dirty look and smack you behind you head cause obviously you didn't go to school. Just cause someone looks white doesn't make it so cause a lot of black people that are really pale look white, but they aren't, so you shouldn't make judgements like that. ( this note from above is for the other commentator that made the ridiculous and stupid comment about Alex being Greek and obviously he is white, when he's not)
I'm a African Canadian not Mediterranean
I like this one so far, can't wait for more background info on the both of them.
Janez9over 11 years agoI love it I hope you're gonna continue this story because it definitely grabbed my attention please update!!!
ladiebrowneyezover 11 years agoWHATS BETTER THAN INTERRACIAL ! VIRGIN INTERRACIAL >.< ok i gotta read it again
AnimeGirl91over 11 years agoI like this story alot! I would like to see a continuation of this story =)
allisonfancyover 11 years agoAuthorHi all I'm working on chapter 2 as we speak it may not have a sex scene because it's going to be backgrounds about the characters. Although I won't pass up an opportunity at add at least one scene in the grand scheme of things. Thanks for all the feedback I'm hooked and EditorKarl you're the best!
cherryontop1973over 11 years agoI am really enjoying your story so far and look forward to the next chapter.
Anonymousover 11 years agoI'm so glad you're working on the next chapter. This was good and I will be checking back. -DC
ladiebrowneyezover 11 years agofekeejngknvkgn i know its only been 4 days but im suffering here :((((
vickivaleover 11 years agoWhere is the update???? WHERE? Where? WHERE? I want to know what happens!
allisonfancyover 11 years agoAuthorI have submitted the update to my wonderful editor just now (it's 1 am here so unless he's up for no reason like me it wont be worked on tonight) I'm sorry to keep you all waiting it's been a combo of extra busy life and some other things that I talk about at the beginning of the story, coupled with the fact that my spouses schedule is the opposite of mine right now and he is being moody and trying to withhold the penis is not helping me at all. I know some things should stay in the box but if can't talk about my lack of sex here then where can I share. The feedback is appreciated and I can't wait to post chapter 2, 3 is already in the works I plan to minimize the gaps in chapters in the future. Even if it means tying my husband to the bed and taking it (which i should do anyway lol) ~Allisonfancy
allisonfancyover 11 years agoAuthorHi all you can also check out my blog for more info, playlist, character list and descriptions as well as teasers of upcoming chapters! Thanks and much love <3
allisonfancy.blogspot.com
KittyOh48almost 10 years agoI call that a walking orgasim! Can not wait to read at least 20 chapters of this story!
WOW!
